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The 4th Journey
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invaderzz 2017 年 9 月 16 日 下午 10:25 
this is incredible.
SlenderPaul  [作者] 2016 年 12 月 13 日 上午 12:48 
Uh I dont know. They just symbolize death i guess.
doll daughter 2016 年 12 月 12 日 下午 4:40 
So are the skeletons at the end meant to be entirely human, or does the hologram have any meaning?
SlenderPaul  [作者] 2016 年 11 月 6 日 下午 3:51 
noice
Desert Rose 2016 年 11 月 6 日 下午 3:41 
not bad :o i like to try to make a story out of a level as i zoom past it and this one got a bit sad x3
Legion495 2015 年 9 月 1 日 上午 5:03 
Nice one you made Paul just some thing illuminate the Tanks? Would give it a Tron-style touch there.
SlenderPaul  [作者] 2015 年 8 月 9 日 下午 3:13 
Hey Ayan Baqur i can realy see your point. The truth is that i had a lot of trouble to get the visuals right and i have not realy ideas how to make the clues more clear. For the luck part i can only agree a bit. For me the warfield leaves enough room to respont to all the randomness and in the wielding room (laser room) the luck part kinda doesnt seem so bad to me. Usualy if you get cut in there you still can make it to the next Checkpoint. I could try to improve some stuff but honestly im kinda burned out from making tracks since a while.
Hangurber 2015 年 7 月 31 日 下午 9:16 
Nice visuals! I can tell you put a lot of time into this, but I feel theres a bit too much fuckery; the visual clues aren't clear in some areas and it feels like it takes luck to get though other areas.
Qubic (SolarisJT) 2015 年 6 月 19 日 下午 11:41 
Wow! Amazing scenery, nice job with the road transfers, and... that ending... just... that ending. Instant thumbs up!
Guizmodo 2015 年 6 月 18 日 上午 9:12 
Hi PPPaul , I really loved doing the whole parcour. For my part, I have suffered no slowdown but I discovered that some objects are hungry of resources. If my next level suffers no slowdown, that would mean that my assumptions are right and I'll make a list if you're interested. Passez une bonne journée mon ami :ilike:
SlenderPaul  [作者] 2015 年 6 月 17 日 上午 2:08 
As usual thank you all for your feedback. I know of the framerate issues and will try to improve it a bit but i'm not sure how much i can do.

I've put a discription for all the shortcuts in a diskussion if you are tired of searching.
Skirmisher 2015 年 6 月 16 日 下午 4:29 
I have no idea where that last shortcut is, but I want to find it. x_x
Jarminx 2015 年 6 月 14 日 下午 7:15 
Laggy as hell.
Nermanater 2015 年 6 月 14 日 上午 4:10 
Wow. This is phenomenal. Such incredible scenery/settings to tell such a vibrant story and you made it really fun at the same time. Really great work man.
Lotsarice 2015 年 6 月 12 日 下午 5:19 
I LOVE these journey tracks!
JTrevail 2015 年 6 月 11 日 下午 5:53 
Yeah, the tanks and the hidden teleporters, the atmosphere was great.
Phimeek 2015 年 6 月 11 日 上午 11:34 
Holy crap, my jaw was dropping to the floor after the war section all the way to the end! Amazing work.