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This will probably be the last update to this thing. For those wondering why I cut ending 2-C short, I decided this story needed an ambiguous semi-bad ending just to not seem like a cop out. If I were to attempt this story again I would tell it differently, and I kinda want to in a future mod at some point.
It was an edit that was a long time coming that I wish I'd done sooner. Looking back, there were a lot of amateur mistakes I knew better than to make but did anyway. I think it was just me getting carried away with learning to mod and not having enough of a filter, and also getting back into writing for the first time in over a year.
If I could do it again, I'd certainly have written the whole thing differently. I may return to this one day for another mod that takes the story in a different direction. For now, this is just cleaning up an old project as best I can. It's a relief to have at least edited it one more time after not looking at it for a year.
Remember: no story is ever perfect and flawless. Self-editing is key to growing as a writer.
I forgot I had my profile set to private. I don't even remember why I did that. But it's public again with my workshop submissions and guides posted there.
No, I don't use social media. Too time consuming and full of potential for drama, so I stick to posting on Steam.
I'm planning on doing another round of edits on this soon as there as some things that have been bugging me that I'd like to change. And I have an idea for how to tackle this scenario differently in a way I ought to have done before, but I'll make that a different mod separate from this one day.
Be sure to check out my other mods.
No. The most I'd consider doing is some edits and minor rewrites, but nothing major.
I made this mod half out of frustration and half for ♥♥♥♥♥ and giggles while learning to mod. It's more productive for me to work on other projects.
i'm not an emotional person but this was beautiful.
It was my first mod and it ended up being a programming mess.
I know some people don't like this mod because I made Inco too different compared to the base game, and I respect that. That's fair criticism. I tried improving it with a lot of edits to the point I got sick to death of working on it. Hell, I'm even sick of just seeing it on the workshop. However people feel about this mod, it shouldn't be seen as anything more than a first attempt at modding/fanfic writing, and an overall unfinished/abandoned work that's not as good as it could've been.
One of the most common complaints I hear is that I made Inco too much like Anon. Even though this is what I was trying to go for because I wanted to imply Olivia's influence changed Inco (who's already something of a blank slate), I can see where I went overboad in places. Probably because I prefer Anon as a character myself and find base Inco too bland. For now, I've cut down on the cursing and acerbic social commentary.
I appreciate any and all constructive criticism I see whether on here or elsewhere. More edits likely to come in the future.
I've heard similar complaints from others about the pop-culture references and how I belabor the point at times. I'll tone it down in my next round of edits.
Thank you for the constructive criticism, and I'm glad you enjoyed my mod.
My only criticism is that you might have gone overboard with the references to internet humor, e-celebs, and media. I'd cut down a bit on these if it doesn't serve the plot too much.
Including a reference as a means to worldbuild is ok when its something like the OPM drawing or a song lyric that fits the situation the characters are in, but direct conversations about "I saw x on the internet" or when viewing whatever is on their screen should be limited.
It kinda pulls the viewer out of the experience and at times it can even feel a bit tonally deaf depending on the case.
One might argue that its supposed to reflect the world we live in today especially since the majority of the playerbase is very familiar with internet media, memes and such, but IMO I don't really want to think about that when immersing in the story.
TL;DR: too many IRL references, takes me out of the game sometimes.
Still enjoyed the game and want to see more!
Oh snap. Thanks, fam. I'll be sure to fix these in my next round of edits.
https://imgur.com/a/obYOE5j
Take your time and don't stress about it.
Also, don't let what a few small minded haters say get you down. Those types are no better than Trish or Mia, they just don't realize it. You not only wrote this, you programmed it. And they can never take that away from you. Judging by the number of favorites and awards, a lot of people like this mod.
I did have an idea for an epilogue at the end of Ending 2-C. I can't promise when I'll do it, but it's on the back burner for now. Still wanted to do another round of edits.
Thank you for the continual support. That goes for everyone else as well.
Apart for fixes, do you plan on further updating the mod content-wise? Not that I have any issues with what you've given as it is, just curious.
1) That's a weirdly specific analogy. Projection, maybe?
2) Apart from Inco being angry and not pressing Olivia on Ben making her the way she is, their scene in the rain plays out relatively the same as in the base game. And even in the base game, Inco wins that argument so hard that Olivia is forced to concede he's right and she's wrong and a terrible friend (if you make the right choices).
3) Inco is still portrayed (depending on what you choose) in a childish and villainous role, so he's not without fault.
Low IQ take from you, bruh -_-
This mod deserves a 100
Feel free to post any and all criticism in the discussion thread I made above. I'd be interested to hear.
You'll have to disable other mods to get it to work optimally. That's been an issue everyone has had a problem with.
I'll get around to finishing the Loneliness Ending, as well as further editing. No promises on when though.
apart from the loneliness ending being too incomplete (i do love the use of nin tho) and a glitch that makes damiens mom named spears, its a fine experience
but honestly, i find it a tad wordy, but if you like a lot of reading, that can be good