Well this one was a workout. =D

You're very perceptive: I finished it in two days to fill a DAC slot

It's cool as a main menu theme. As for a sprint track, meh. I would've spent a little more work on it in my opinion. Not being rude, but it feels as though it was rushed a bit.

Oooooh.

That's where the car spawner sits, so if you set this as your main menu map that's where you'll be

Whats that checkpoint in the sky with a portal in the middle?

Haha thanks ;)

And i thought Tiedye was the only one who could make levels that i would loath. At least there are tracks i can take when I get to the point of throwing my controller at the walls. Good Job.

I'm okay with this being the most challenging level in the DAC lol

Beautiful environment, and really challenging, but again, maybe a bit too challenging?

Made tweaks to the end-portion of the track, added larger and easier-to-land-on bits of track you can cool yourself down on, in keeping with the rest of the track's pattern of having shortcuts that are more difficult to take, but allowing the player an easier alternative if they're incapable of beating the more challenging section.

You're in luck; the level hasn't been added to the DAC collection list yet, so I have the opportunity to make difficulty tweaks without risking exclusion from the grouping.

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My suggestion, if you want feedback, would be to enable wings on the gear part only, and then disable them. Also, I freaking love the discription and world-building. I want to get into sci-fi writing, and the stuff youve written for this and Six-Dimensional Space is amazing.

Well, I hope that this came off as constructive rather than whiny, and I look foward too whatever youv'e got in store for the 24th.

So... I dont know how to put this, but, *ehm* Not everyone has beaten NWBO 4. While I know a bit on how to do grip flight, mostly from watching your videos and completing Hijack, doing stuff like threading the needle through the gears proved way too dificult to actually complete. And everything before, well, it wasnt that dificult, but that was only because I had what little experiance I did with grip flight.

While the level is absolutely fair for someone with your skill level, it'll just seem impossible for most of the people playing the calender. I mean, just look at the rest of the calender so far. Everything before is dificult, but fair, and even a noob like me who only got the game a month and a half ago can complete them with a few crashes, but then the dificulty spikes into the stratosphere with this one. {part1/2}

HOW IN THE WORLD I AM SUPPOSED TO PASS THAT STUPID FLIGHT SECTION?!?!?!?!?