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2015 年 1 月 3 日 上午 4:11
2015 年 7 月 6 日 下午 3:52
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Serpentine

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A green and twisted sprint track. My first track so far. I'll probably experiment with some different lighting in future versions, but otherwise I'm pretty happy with the track overall. Feel free to let me know what you think! :)
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souldrain 2015 年 1 月 9 日 下午 11:34 
Thanks for posting this level. It seems like a good start to me! I have some constructive criticism.

* Lighting is an issue. The "driving into the sun" / bloom aesthetic is frustrating, especially the first time through. (FWIW my graphics settings are turned all the way up. I assume the heavy bloom is intentional?)
* Your level lacks signage. There are multiple points where it's not clear what the player is supposed to be doing.
* Some of the obstacles feel like cheap shots. I recommend reviewing the level with a friend who hasn't played it before! The lighting and signage issues make this worse, but you still may want to reconsider some obstacles.
* The level is long, around 3 minutes or a little less, yet it also involves a fair amount of rote learning. This can be frustrating midway through the level. It might not be a bad idea to break your ideas in half in the future, there's no prize for having the longest level.

Thanks again and I hope to see more work!