Since comments only allow 1k characters, I'm just going to start up a thread here for people to post reviews and critique. Or at least, mine. Hope you don't mind, mod author.

Spoilers follow if you stumbled here, so tread carefully.

So, first thing I noticed is that I'm running an old rig, and even with HD textures off, this scenario *chugged* for me. Particularly during the Matrix/Meatspace combat with both going on at the same time, I was at about 8-10 FPS. Now, yeah, part of that is because I'm on a beater craptop from my college days, but I can still run a solid 90-95% of SR:HK without this kind of slowdown. As I'm just dipping my toe into the editor myself, I can't really give any recommendations on how to fix this.

The "detective work" in the hotel could use another run with a polishing edit. When looking at the crack in the wall, why is there an option to widen the hole if it's only going to cause more trouble in the long run? The main exit is perfectly useable for egress, but that isn't made clear, so I opened the crack wider. I mean, if that's your intent, fine, but it's...an odd choice, from a GM perspective.

Spotting the jackpoint on the second floor instantly locks the player into combat movement despite there being no threat. That was the first room I walked into on the second floor, so I kind of felt the need to jack in and get the party started, but that means I never explored your gorgeously-designed second floor. Maybe take a look at the triggers there and try to make jacking in an option when the player right clicks on the jackpoint rather than a zone-entry trigger (take a look at how HBS does the jack-in option triggers; I really like whatever they're doing). You can still have a conversation trigger there, but try not to put the player into combat mode.

The setting up defenses feels kind of meaningless. I had several turns in Matrix and Meatspace before they ever came into play, where I could move the characters around. If I wanted to, I could've set them in those locations manually over the course of several turns. Is there a reason for the placing characters moment that I just wasn't aware of?

Minor personal quibble: I hate columns. They say they provide half cover, but they kill LoS, making their tactical use nigh useless. When designing your rooms in the future, try not to use four columns in a 10x10 room. Just makes combat messy and kind of annoying. They've been that way since Dragonfall, and I just don't see them changing any time soon.

Also, there's a weird half cover that popped up for me in the doorway on the second floor of the hotel going out of the main room into the western hallway, facing east. Don't know if it's supposed to be there, but take a look at the cover overlay and make sure it's something you want there. I didn't particularly mind, because hey, free cover, but it felt a little weird.

I'm not sure how I feel about what you did for ley lines. Personally, I like them to just appear at their strength. I'm assuming it was a conscious decision to have a particle effect and only have the ley line strength show up when standing on it. Not what I would've gone with, but eh. I also couldn't figure out what the ley lines were doing for my mage protagonist; I did see on the heavy ley line in the last scene that it lowered some spell cooldowns, but the medium and light ley lines, no clue whatsoever.

I absolutely loved the Matrix color scheme you used, particularly in the second phase (Icarus, I think?). The purple/maroon color scheme felt super 80s/retro synthwave.

The first Matrix phase is...pretty confusing. You might want to get a playtester on that. I finally jacked out after getting traced (and fighting off the Trace IC) having done I think everything I could only to advance the story. Having a prompt to jack out when you have everything you need from phase 1 would be useful.

The Etiquette: Academic conversation option in the last scene ends your dialogue with the spider shaman (cool characters, btw). I think from the dialogue in the comments it looks like that's been a recurring issue, so, just putting it out there: it's still an issue. The game now progresses, but that's kinda it for the dialogue tree.

Overall, it's a good starting base. The story looks solid from my end, and as someone with little knowledge of the P&P Shadowrun, I'd heard of Icarus station, so I kind of know what's going on. Good work overall!