..alright here are my 2 cents, take with a grain of salt, just trying to help


+ I like the intial scrapyard idea itself, not being seen that often (doesnt seem like a scrapyard though, rather just a random wall of car models on a street)

- bad visibility (apply lighter textures, reskin props or model new ones)

- very chaotic mixture of themes, placing italy/inferno theme right next to nuke + vertigo themes and adding the dust palm and tibet skybox assets on top of that just doesnt make any sense, doesnt feel believable

- those wire pillars need some wires

- why are those skyscrapers pretending to be the tower of pisa

- improve the clipping, i get stuck on car models and upleasant drops when transitioning from the road to pavement

- inspect your props closer, the upper barrels are flying in air

- the grass on sides seems too linearly placed and all parts seem to have the same height, needs a bit some 'randomness' imo

- overall not a fan of having car props as a cover (unpredictable bullet penetration, harder to clip properly)

- fix the spawns, right now you get some spawns seeing eachother right at the start


If I were in your shoes I would take the initial scrapyard idea and do a new map from scratch, trying to do an actual scrapyard while trying to avoid the mistakes mentioned above ;)

Rump3L の投稿を引用：

..alright here are my 2 cents, take with a grain of salt, just trying to help


+ I like the intial scrapyard idea itself, not being seen that often (doesnt seem like a scrapyard though, rather just 2 random walls of car models on a street)

- bad visibility (apply lighter textures, reskin props or model new ones)

- very chaotic mixture of themes, placing italy/inferno theme right next to nuke + vertigo themes and adding the dust palm and tibet skybox assets on top of that just doesnt make any sense, doesnt feel believable

- those wire pillars need some wires

- why are those skyscrapers pretending to be the tower of pisa

- improve the clipping, i get stuck on car models and upleasant drops when transitioning from the road to pavement

- inspect your props closer, the upper barrels are flying in air

- the grass on sides seems too linearly placed and all parts seem to have the same height, needs a bit some 'randomness' imo

- overall not a fan of having car props as a cover (unpredictable bullet penetration, harder to clip properly)

- fix the spawns, right now you get some spawns seeing eachother right at the start


If I were in your shoes I would take the initial scrapyard idea and do a new map from scratch, trying to do an actual scrapyard while trying to avoid the mistakes mentioned above ;)

Thanks a lot, I really appreciate your feedback really helpful.
well this is my 2nd map , i'm quite new in this but i understand all your points and will try to fix as much as i can.
well after finishing this map i could able to think good name so most of people suggested thsi name so i gave this name, Genuenlly i want to make a proper skrapyard type map and will try in future.
If you have any good name suggestion please let me know, And thanks again. ^_^

No problem, saw your amount of hours in SDK so its perfectly fine and understandable. It comes with time and im far from perfect myself ;) Glad that you accepted and appreciate the feedback. Well, I dont have any original ideas for the name except that maybe some of the abbreviations of the word itself

We Shiped a new update for now, hope its better than last time. Still have to fix those wires. they are too big

Rump3L の投稿を引用：

No problem, saw your amount of hours in SDK so its perfectly fine and understandable. It comes with time and im far from perfect myself ;) Glad that you accepted and appreciate the feedback. Well, I dont have any original ideas for the name except that maybe some of the abbreviations of the word itself

i love this map

Cat toe の投稿を引用：

i love this map

Thanks ^_^

弟弟