In the opening screen the constant use of 'too' is wrong. I also think the last line just doesn't read well and should be something like 'But first, the vile taint of the local greenskins has to be removed for Laurelorn Forest will never be safe while greenskins threaten its borders.'

New problem. When choosing Ariel or Marisith the text that appears as you mouse over your choice doesn't make much sense.
When choosing Ariel it should probably say something along the lines of "What does this show about you?"
When choosing Marisith maybe it could say "Are you sure about this?"
These would make players consider their choice more, this is just a suggestion though.

Oh thanks. I put this text because I couldn't find where it showed. But now that you told me where it shows I can put serious texts in there. Thanks

I found a few problems in the unit descriptions.

Naestra: Naestra is considered as the most luminous manifestation of the Spirit of Ariel
This should be 'Naestra is often considered to be the most luminous manifestation of the Spirit of Ariel'

Great Stag: When the Forest is in danger the Great Stag is always the first to fight for the protection of the forest
This would read better if it was 'When the Forest is in danger the Great Stag is always the first to fight for its survival'

Meadow Chariot: The Eonir don't find all the weapons of the Empire useful but Chariots and crossbows is definitely one of the better things they learned from the humans
This doesn't make much sense, it should probably read 'The Eonir don't have a use for most of the weapons the Empire employ, but Chariots and crossbows definitely have their uses'

When you mouse over the Warrior Queen of Trade trait for Marisith the description doesn't read perfectly.
It should read 'Marisith is a master diplomat and skilled tradesmen but don't be fooled, she is one of the best warriors in Laurelorn Forest.'