This song can improve in many many ways. First of all, it's very repetitve and spammy with its note structure. It's not exactly the most thrilling playing experience just spamming my arrow keys. Second, you arcs weren't perfect. You can add perfect arcs in the editor by remapping your keys to the presets and adjusting the notes manually. The background, though it is an upgrade from a blank one isn't too connected to the song and it doesn't change up much. Try going the extra mile with your maps before you post them! It always results in quality maps!

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・ TIMING [1-5] ------------------------ 2
・ STORYBOARD [1-5] ------------ 2

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