Qbeh-1: The Atlas Cube

Qbeh-1: The Atlas Cube

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Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 17 日 下午 12:46 
I have moved the portal th the end of statues andput a room around it so still using the top but with activation cube for door instead.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 14 日 下午 5:22 
Nice view!
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:29 
I'm checking them out! I made a Portal 2 level. But only one so far.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:12 
if you interested, I don't know if you like the bhop/ strafe ones though.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:11 
and also I have made portal 2 levels
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:11 
I will update when I have a clue.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:10 
I would but I can't imagine how to do it now
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:10 
So I guess we are collaborating! :)
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:09 
And much better at the save stone area! Good job. The gameplay is better now. You might make the jump to the platform a little easier though! Just a half block closer would do it.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:09 
http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/255957580522425010/F5FB11A422E91F2956B548B95453A399EF8445D8/
What if you placed a stair or a moving platform back down to where the little white dot is in the screenshot from the 3 green cube high jump, then moved the portal to the yard between the statues below where it is now? I think that would be really nice. You would have to restrict access from the yard, though. Then you would have that great view of the line of statues as you approach the portal. I would raise the walkway so you could see the line of purple cubes in the raised beds, though - or lower the edges of the beds so you can see it better.
I don't really like the final portal platform as it is - the rest of the level is so lovely.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:05 
and that door that can't be opened I guess was an unintentional thing that fits in with this level.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:04 
I would go for
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:03 
so 1.5
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 3:03 
5 publishes
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 2:53 
You might want to put version numbers in to help players keep track of which version it is. I start at 1.0, then go up a whole number after major updates, so my guess is that you would be on 2.2.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 2:25 
in the garden green carves?
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 2:25 
which 2?
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 2:24 
so you will never open that door.
DSpecht 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 2:24 
I managed to reach the garden area before finishing the underground area, though. Also, I got stuck behind two small block statues.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 2:23 
that door was a way, but I changed it due to a recommendation.
DSpecht 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 2:19 
Nice level. The secrets were fun to track down. I just failed to open one door, but since I already found all smileys I stopped looking for the last activation cube.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 1:11 
And also ou can make 'negative' blocks.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:57 
I'll try it! :)
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:50 
after first door
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:50 
I have blocked this off so you cannot get to gareden or go back th save stone.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:31 
It's better, but you should consider closing off access to the yard from the save stone. It's not intuitive that you have to drop down and complete the lower area, and that's where the blue cube is. You might widen the "moat" or raise the wall that surrounds that little courtyard where you first enter the yard, so you see the activation cube but have to go back and find a blue cube because you can't leave the courtyard. It's a great vantage point to see the yard, but not be able to go out.

I would make the exit from the platform and the lower area directly above the platform, here:
http://psteamcommunity.yuanyoumao.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=702600884
You have a place where you could open up the wall and then explore the back section of the yard - and maybe add some gameplay there.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:10 
Awesome! Here's another view you might consider:
http://psteamcommunity.yuanyoumao.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=702548511
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:04 
and a division.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:04 
with an activation cube visible it should be easier.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:03 
Old entrance is blocked and portal is visible from Statues.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 下午 12:02 
I have changed it.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:46 
Definitely watch someone else play it - and no talking to them at all! That will really show you where the problem areas are. Anytime they stop for a while and look around, you need to fix that area because they don't know where to go.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:44 
I'm looking forward to seeing it! When I published my level challenge Church Ruins level, it really was unfinished. But after 16 major revisions and another week and a half working on it, I was happy with the final version. But I really had to work on my path and the gameplay. There had to be a single, long twisty line that you follow through the space and don't deviate from, and I had to keep improving it till it worked for the players.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:43 
I will try to make the changes.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:42 
There are lots of ways to make changes - but the main thing is to have only a single, continuous path that is really clear to the player. All the color, buildings and space in the yard means that the end has to be plain. You can subdivide the yard with a low wall so you meander around it, like from room to room, and the next thing is when you have traveled all the way through. Don't forget to make vantage points from which to appreciate the view.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:41 
I have an idea of what to do for it.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:40 
I may build an enclosed space which can only be accesseds by top where portal is now.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:39 
I would like to but, that will make so much more to cheat it.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:39 
or put a colapsing door.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:39 
Oh ... breaking goes way beyond red cubes ... I have had to fix so many kinds of brokenness. :) I like extra areas to explore, but the exit needs to be clearly indicated so you know where you are supposed to go eventually. From the yard, you can't see where the exit is. That's why I suggested the change to the end. That's a really visible exit.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:38 
I can block the ramp path off and make a different access way.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:36 
I have cheated levles with those.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:36 
And as breaking it goes, I never have too many red cubes.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:35 
You can publish levels to friends only. I did that with at least one of my levels so I could get it tested before releasing it.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:35 
And also the theme of this levels was. I like Portal 2 and the maps have areas beyond the main path, I wanted to recreate this and make the garden accessible but I could make the entrance from the third room and add a path.
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:33 
And then Limboh and Cheetah break the level ... repeatedly. :)
Mrs Ellie 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:33 
You could send me a friend request and we could collaborate before publicly posting a level. One of us could build and then the other consults.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:31 
the colaboration that is.
Bubblegum Cuddly Dragoness  [作者] 2016 年 6 月 12 日 上午 11:31 
How?