It still looks great tho

Paint area is too big and it has too many details it looks too busy I think it would be better if you remove yellow things at the middle

I hate to be that guy, but I feel like the paint might be a little too much (the material and model of the item is great, however). I'd love to see a style where the necktie was paintable instead (you can keep the original paint region, if anything, people have the choice to not paint it).

This looks great! Though I think he should also have some showman slacks to go with it. Besides Demo could sure use some fancy slacks that aren't already part of another cosmetic.