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(I'm sorry if my english is bad, but i'm not used to write english)
And if you write it as [url=http://psteamcommunity.yuanyoumao.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=352381599]Gmod-Version[/url] , you get this: Gmod Version
Also, I would like to ask you if you could make a map similar to this but based in a midnight city and with a long highway, instead of a railway. Something inspired by map like koth_king(a lonely midnight road surrounded with buildings, neon lights etc.)
The map in general is very well made, ESPECIALLY for a first. The tracks are PERFECTLY connected in the skybox and the map itself, you made a good choice of sky, of props, and general feels of it being in the middle of nowhere. Since it's so wide-open, there's plenty of space for scenebuilding and what not. I can proudly tell you that those 300+ subscribers were well earned!
proximity of them with TF2 train cars, and they are clipping into one another.
A more awkward suggestion is that there's a very noticable lack of various desert props, like rocks, cacti or eventually telephone towers going along the tracks.
Finally, the ends of the tracks in the skybox are a bit awkward. on the end with the tunnel, even at a distance, it's obvious there's no "blackiness" which masks the fact that there's solid rock in the tunnel. On the other end, it just ends at nothing, but I can't complain about that much since it is a long distance away. Would have been cooler if it curved and went behind some hills at the side or something. Still, it's my opinion on that.
Okay, nitpicking and s*itty personal opinion over.
First, there are some minor placement errors with some props, like the stairs at the station, which are clipping in the ground, and the windows at the "ticket booth" (as seen on the 4th image) have no corresponding openings inside.
Next, I really don't see the point of that pulley at where the road ends. it's just looking weird is my opinion. Also, the road just ends there, it doesn't continue any further after the station.
Following up, in general, it would make little sense for there to be a train station in the middle of nowhere. Maybe add a Water tower or something? (Then again, it's not that hard to add that while scenebuilding, so just ignore this part)