Not the biggest fan of this warpaint, but the inspiration definitely has a lot of potential

I would highly suggest going back to the drawing board and redoing the texture of the stripes

They are definitely too solid and not weathered enough

Some additional cammo feeling vibe sto the metal gradiant would definitely help

GL

Also I love your Milkmann's Makeover, it's one of my favorite Workshop Paints! <3
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This is a good concept. I have some suggestions that might improve it!

Orientation lock the metal plate texture. The random angle variation of the stripes is good enough by itself to make each seed more unique. Plus, I think the War Paint will look better and less busy with the metal plating locked to be horizontal/vertical.

See if you can try using a more decorated base War Paint. Something like Park Pigmented would add nice breakage from the stripes, especially the Shotgun and Scattergun.

If you do use Park Pigmented as a base, having a sticker/emblem would help as well. You can use that "324" that's on the side of the tank!

This is probably overkill, but if it needs just a touch more flair try giving it albedo shine, I think it would probably make it really pop. Custom wear could make it stand out better as well, but for a design like this the default wear is not too bad.

Hope to see more stuff from ya! :)

really nice