the game crashes when i escape the soldier and i jump in the bed , in the dream section. it's genuinely frustrating

gotta admit i love the description

This feels like A:TB mixed with Yume Nikki (2004) and Close Your Eyes (2018)

Finished it after a break. As others have mentioned, you're massively underselling this. Astonishing work especially for a rookie developer :D

- Expansive yet compact sections to a decent sized bunker
- Nice layout and gameplay elements
- Accurate recreation of mechanics from the original Bunker
- Nice ending, wish there was a little more to it.

I definitely recommend this, and I do suggest you submit this to the War Jam, it's currently one of the top3 mods for the game.

Once again, great job, hope to see more!

A few issues I've found:
- The complete darkness at the start of the Bunker until you find a lamp is a bit much and unnecessary, as previously mentioned.
- When you shoot down the shelf with the resources they can easily fall out of reach. I recommend putting an extra plank that falls from the shelf that could help the player retrieve them.
- In the ending orb room you can full under the structure on the sides, there is no collision. I recommend checking it our yourself and placing blockboxes
- For the workshop image to work, you have to make sure you image is rather small (1024x1024 jpg works fine) and is in the same folder as the mod's entry.hpc. Hope this solves your issue with it :D

While it's a Well Made map,
you REALLY made it Hard to Follow where not Only you're Supposed to go,
But, where Key Items are.

While things like the Lighter are, Obviously, supposed to be Hidden,
The Communications room made things seem Impossible to Do,
Considering the Only Place I Haven't Gone to is Blocked, with No Way to Open it.

if this is your first ever experience in game developing then it is certain you will make so many bangers in terms of custom stories and i know that you could make really fun/funny mods
this was a very fun custom story because this custom story encouraged being on the move more than hiding and i love it for that
excellent job dude, you really undersell yourself

How to get Shotgun in this custom story?

Damn, nice, then I will hop back in soon and finish it propely and give it my review in more detail.

@Kiraimmortalhu
There's two spots to get a revolver, in the trenches if you deduce what the guy's combination is you can get one, and the other is at the end of the blood trail next to the generator with the dead body.
The Lever for the machine is in the end section past the bridges, once you've dropped into the tunnels there's no need to head back up.
The prison supplies were supposed to be a trade bullet for supplies kind of thing, shooting the plank to drop the stuff into arms reach - Or you can shove the spade through the bars and scrape the stuff along the floor till you can reach it.

This is impressive so far! Altho I do agree that the initial flashlight placement in the total darkness was a questionable decision. I have some questions.

- First, where was the revolver? I think I totally missed it
- Is the tunnels from storage supposed to be an area you can't back from, meaning the lever for the machine should be there? I tried going back to explore more and find the lever hopefully but was unable to climb back up and had to reload a save
- How are you supposed to open the one locked door in the prison which seem to hold some resources? As I'm currently fairly low on any offensive options and fuel, I'd like to get in there.

Phenomenal work. This is the level of work in custom stories I've been craving since the old days. One note I will leave is that the wooden pillar near the hole where the wheel is can mess with the AI of the monster. He got stuck there until I blew him up with a grenade. 9/10

Lol, the description. Sold! Trying this out!

If person with no dev exp can do this good, can't wait til you have more exp. That probably be GOAT.

Thanks for all this feedback, I was aware it wasn't going to be perfect but I had no idea how - I might do an update at some point to fix any bug issues and maybe shuffle round problem parts, but that'll depend on if I get more things to fiddle with - It's such a large mod that steam wouldn't let me try to upload it again to fix the cover picture, so I want a bunch of stuff done at once

Everything is too dark and I just can't find the flashlight
Did I miss it early before going inside the bunk or what

You made a really awesome first mod
I am impress

It was really nice and fun mod, lot of new thinks and is the only mod that is long so far.
I hope we see i lot of mods from you

Pretty good custom story, well done. Others have mentioned it already but the open map and lack of loading screens goes a long way towards improving the cat-and-mouse aspect of the game. The scarcity of fuel creates more opportunity to interact with the the metaphorical cat. I would suggest that the flashlight be placed in a more obvious spot.

And yes I am a smooth brain.

So far I am really impressed with the quality of this mod (albeit I disagree with the map feedback thread), but one big complaint I have is where basic shit like the flashlight is stored.

I made it through half the map before I found the flashlight, rummaging around in the dark hugging walls. Please consider changing it so that the flashlight is an immediate location at the start of the playthrough for the player. One that cannot be missed like the first set of bunks in the tunnel, maybe next to one of the lanterns.

It is not a fun experience having to meander for a basic tool like that X.X

Otherwise, fantastic mod.

the boonk