Nice work ^_^

While yeah I think these fit tf2's weapon descriptions more they sometimes feel a bit more cluttered. But for some (especially knockback rage and disposable sentry) these upgrades FINALLY give this information to the player! It's never stated anywhere that knockback rage halves damage or disposable sentries aren't affected by upgrades. YES! But the crit canteen description extra text should probably only appear if you are playing Engineer.

wait crit canteens actually boost sentry fire rate???

My only issue with this is that the knockback rage does not lower damage!! It just pitches down the sounds !!

Sentry fire rate increases with the crit canteen is something I never knew.

agreeing with burekas and mayo_, these will add further confusion

Also the knockback rage upgrade reduces fire rate by 50% not damage

I feel like the negative stats (eg -50% damage knock back rage) should be highlighted in red text to better distinguish it.

Good idea, but I think the original works better, the less is more approach if you will. For someone news that needs the descriptions, these would most likely just confused them with how densely written it feels.

some of these are even more confusing than the original

what about just "dies"? ofc it's technically not a living thing, but i think that word will be a lot more easily understood in spite of that

The reason it says "destroys" instead of self-destructs is because the upgrade text box is insanely small and there's no space for it. So destroys was the only good option.

good improvement, but still needs improvements: like disposable sentry "self-destructs" instead of "destroys"

Yoooo Pog