Update here: https://psteamcommunity.yuanyoumao.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2936067957&tscn=1677170045

black part could be a bit of a lighter color. looks nice besides that.

Maybe thats you, but hey, I just do what I want. I think its perfectly fine, I see ALOT of people use it, to prove for it the prices of it are alot higher compared to other warpaints, but whatever

Dude what do you want? A camoflauge skin?? There are so many skins like mine like Cosmic Calamity, Hana, Dream Piped or Dovetailed. It's my 2nd warpaint, idk what you are expecting and I don't give a fuck if it doesn't fit into TF2 or not. It's a game. If you don't like it leave constructive feedback instead of typing like a caveman going "OOGAA CHANGE TEXTURE IT LOOK BAD!!!" like cmon, dude, I'm not an artist, design is my passion and I'm only trying, and for somebody with 0 warpaint submissions you seem to know a lot about how hard it is.

A little bit better than the last one, and certainly heading in the right direction. However, these are small changes that bring in a good set of improvements, but it still feels underdone. The individual stars are a nice touch, and they're hand-drawn too, good work moving that way. All in all, this feels like a good step towards the right direction, but not yet at its destination.

I also have another suggestion: Instead of repeatedly posting updates to your paints as individual submissions, I would HIGHLY suggest posting your progress on a site like GameBanana, Twitter, or even in the Artwork section of the Workshop. You can link it at the bottom of the original submission so people on the workshop can watch the progress of the warpaint and give tips on it as it goes.

Stay focused, work hard, ask around for advice (I'd highly recommend the Tf2Maps discord for advice) and let's see this thing through to the end.