The heart and stomach are roughly in the proper locations. Does that mean Soldier's brain is in his lower torso? Maybe even in his ass?

that seems like a you problem ngl

Ok I may've misread that part but it still doesn't change the fact that:
It doesn't fit any of the characters thematically, would've made more sense to have the organs look damaged or burned or something, and not neatly placed on the grenade belt of each class.
The organ sizes are too small
And tbf this just seems like it'll trade-up fodder now that i'm having a second look at it

Dude it's called Demented Donor, ya should double check when making comments like that

>"Demented doctor"
>Medic can't equip it


It looks fine but it really doesnt make sense on any of the classes that can equip it. Also the fact all the organs are roughly the same size when they shouldn't be makes it look off, additionally the placement of them on the grenade belt makes no sense.
Maybe giving the classes a smoke and blood-stained doctor's apron with some organs stuffed in the pockets instead would be a better execution- it'd certainly make the classes look more like a demented doctor, and the placement of the organs wouldn't look so off imo.

Gross bruh

he's right

Hey guys can u lay off @GoEatATowel? There's really no need to be that rude to them. They gave a valid criticism, they're not just being a toxic jerk like Cinder or something

this should be for medic

@GoEatATowel What the fuck...?

@GoEatATowel No one's gonna accept you to discuss a dumb comment LOL

tiny baby brain

@Kodachi I sent you a friend request to talk about your comment.

@GoEatATowel What a stupid comment

possible seperate style with bloody belt and/or bloody organs?
my only gripe with this is that the organs are "too clean" (no blood anywhere? really?), otherwise a good cosmetic

The example loadouts are not doing this thing any favors. Also the logistics do bother me.

Now we can make people explode with a heart

I love this I think it's perfect as is. Great execution. Who cares about logistics, this is funny.

I like it could maybe be halloween restricted and it would fit with zombie loadouts off the classes especially my PVZ zombie soldier loadout.

I feel as if this item was half-way done. The organs look nice and are well detailed, but just having them float in place on the grenade sections is not the way to go about this concept.
This is raw meat, fresh organs. Let's keep them that way by doing one simple thing:
Put them into sample bags.
Give them little plastic containers that are labeled with each organ's name and donor, maybe as a reference the heart can be from Heavy. These should feel like they were collected, bagged, and tagged, rather than just stapled to the mercenaries chest.
Let's finish this item set up by taking it that much farther, you're halfway to the finish line and you have, from what I can see, the talent to take this thing all the way to its logical conclusion. Get to it!