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Portal Unto Dawn part 2
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Unidentified Body 2016 年 4 月 9 日 上午 10:25 
Too short. Why did it even exist?
otahitie 2015 年 3 月 27 日 下午 10:29 
Mysterious ambiance ! Specially with the strange music !
I like .
quat 2014 年 6 月 26 日 下午 3:36 
Fix your texture alignment, especially around the beginning.

Water looks like poo (literally)

Nice visuals other than that.

no puzzles?
Sunroses 2014 年 4 月 6 日 下午 4:37 
Okay, again with the excessive lighting ! Not as bad as in the first, but pretty close!
And YAY, more hide and seek !

Also, there should be a death trigger down here .
Slordar  [作者] 2014 年 4 月 6 日 上午 5:50 
To all of you that like my short series Portal Unto Dawn
Part 3 is out http://psteamcommunity.yuanyoumao.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=246231611
Slordar  [作者] 2013 年 11 月 21 日 下午 1:10 
maybe
Dad-Elite 2013 年 11 月 21 日 上午 11:39 
or a part 3 :)
Slordar  [作者] 2013 年 11 月 21 日 上午 5:23 
ok maybe this weekend I will start working on a nice test course
The Inquisitor 2013 年 11 月 20 日 下午 9:52 
Nicely put togatrer but, to short,well at least for me that is. True I have made short maps myself. but to go through all this good work for just a walk through is wasting your talent. Dont short change yourself. Give the public that which I know you can.
Slordar  [作者] 2013 年 11 月 20 日 下午 4:00 
Thanks about the looking part was hoping to get a big bang out of that but no matter how hard I tried even with beta peti parts but thats all I came up with

for now :]
DeathWish808 2013 年 11 月 20 日 下午 1:11 
Not a bad looking map at all, but a puzzle would be nice next time. ;-)
Slordar  [作者] 2013 年 11 月 17 日 下午 6:01 
yeah I hope to since I only recently started to full create hammer maps
Wolf bytes 2013 年 11 月 17 日 下午 5:47 
Interesting, hope to see more like this, but maybe with more tests than walking?
Dad-Elite 2013 年 11 月 9 日 下午 5:30 
http://psteamcommunity.yuanyoumao.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=74283433
wildgoosespeeder 2013 年 11 月 8 日 下午 12:58 
This was just a bunch of portaling and walking.

Try my SP map?
http://www.steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=192976369
Try my COOP map?
http://www.steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=181160432
Dad-Elite 2013 年 11 月 7 日 上午 9:55 
Very cool map could be better longer though
Slordar  [作者] 2013 年 11 月 4 日 上午 10:10 
thanks looks great :)
Gemarakup 2013 年 11 月 4 日 上午 9:37 
Trust me. This will make your observation rooms look good. https://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Creating_an_Observation_Hallway
Slordar  [作者] 2013 年 11 月 4 日 上午 9:24 
Thanks, it is pretty much my second hammer map(unless you count a few tiny rooms that did not do much),I hope to fix the flaws soon, and do you have a link to these tutors?
Gemarakup 2013 年 11 月 4 日 上午 8:20 
Nice map. A few design flaws but that's normal for a 2nd map (if it is). I'd reccomend looking at some A4 maps to see how the BTS areas are made and at the tutorial on the VDC for portal 1 on how the observation rooms are made. Overall I liked it. I rated it up.