i'm disappointed that there was no storybook when there was a perfect moment to create a storybook reason for these places in his memory

Since you can stand on parts of the picture of Mafia Town, I was wondering, did you make that picture by shrinking Mafia Town & flattening it?

Nice level, probably a bit too easy though. And the pieces count is not resetting at the beginning of each level, once you got, let's say 3 pieces at the first level, you can just rush to the exit for the other levels. But the idea is nice, it's great to see modders interested in digging side characters' stories :D

This was a nice relaxing rift level after I went through that Vanessa's story level. Also you don't actually need hookshot lol.

Bonicle, you made a typo in 'probably'

okay. so from what i can tell, you propably cooked in the wrong checkpoint.
secondly, the hidden volumes at the end aren't working. otherwise, great level!