Good. Need part 3

i love how every campaign NEEDS a manny pardo level, he's the goat for a reason

first night out of the er shes already fuckin

could we get a chapter 3?

and need better gameplay

nice story

Good work, good preview

канонистьiij

very good ishi bishi

hot

Overall the goods scale equal with the bad and you definitely show potential! I don't want you to take this as a personal attack as I just felt like reviewing the campaign and will probably considering more campaigns from hereon out as it was fun to write this. Good job and keep on making more levels! I'm looking forward to playing more of your campaigns to see what you can bring to the table!

I'd give it a 5/10. Keep working hard, and good luck with your next project!

The dialouge was badly written and lackluster and was filled with typos although I don't plan on making fun of you for the typos as you might be dyslexic or from another country and it seems rood to laugh at you for something you can't control very well, however the writing could be improved tremendously and leaves something to be desired. Try getting inside the charachters head, or asking for help from more talented writers from the community! Also I advise making Ninja Girl more solemn and cold cut with breif moments of comedy for brevity if you ever make a redux or another campaign with her, because as it stands you write her as a edgy teen with gay weeaboo syndrome; she's not likable.

I think Manny Pardo's level while fine was completely unneccecary along with the ideas introduced. The concept of Ninja Girl being a undercover agent (while like all ideas has potential to be done right) was in my honest opinion completely R E D I C U L O U S expecially with her police and hospital raid in the campaign considered as that is totally and completely illegal since she is killing POLICE OFFICERS. The Richard segment at the end was poorly executed as Richard is a angel of death with warnings that are ignored by the cast, and only states that he is impressed when the charachters actually take his warnings seriously and move on to better and less violent life paths; realizing what they did was wrong (Example: Richter).

If you don't mind I would like to leave a review of this campaign since I have very mixed thoughts on it. Personally I though while a bit chalenging the levels were fun, flawed, but fun and for the most part were fun to play through. Of course there was the occasianal misplaced tile here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed. The sprites were glitched but alright lookinng. The ninja girl sprite is amazing and very nice to look at with its animations and pixel art, if not for a single glitch when they're holding a baton. If you made it, I have to say I am seriously impressed. I like the concept of Ninja Girl only being badly injured after her encounter with Jacket, since her death is never announced along with the idea of her being lesbian/bi infered by the hooker you put in her hotel and how she flirts with corey since she does seem very suave.

Are you going to do more Ninja Girl? It's kinda cool to see mods that let you play as her.

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Not bad but that cutscene at the beginning of No Mercy is really irritating

@LAMBS TO THE COSMIC SLAUGHTER Well thanks you,I thought the biggest deficiency was just getting into the mind of the characters, I am glad that you like it.

I remember playing the first a WHILE back. Glad to see you've continued on, Kopin. It's got very fluid level design and dialogue; fitting for the Ninja grill.

@vitaminH Thanks

nice

@♂TOMUS♂ Thanks

@dapp_Y Argument not found

Damn, man, nice work!
Sprites are fucking incredible.

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Thanks, you scared me like shit men ;-)

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sll fixed after re-sub great work dude.

@Mottenmann Yeah that was the first Upload which was messed up this is reupload try it again it work for me and my friend which download it does not have problem with it either. Idk what should happened does any of your friend have similar problem?
Thanks for notice anyway... :-)

i dunno what went wrong but the skins were all messed up. the scene where she watches her self in the mirror is kinda broken because u see martins messed up face not hers. or the level where she wield a katana ,it was just the sons skin.and many more problems ocurred. maybe u uploaded the raw mod without reskins ,seems like it. (i am so sorry for broken english hope you understand what i am trying to say anyways)