amazing song and even more amazing edit.
hope to hear more of these songs. gl on the next song.

Sharp basically said what I would say. The song is quite easy which isn't a bad thing, but most intralism players are looking for a higher challenge at this point. Backgrounds are nothing to rave about and there was a few places were timing could've been touched up. If you fix those things and submit for remoderation, I bet you'd score much higher. Good luck and keep cranking out maps! (As long as they're quality of course :P)

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