I played this offline with normal wine on Linux with the Windows' version of the game. For some reason Proton was not working as expected.

This drags too much, which is a common problem in VNs. Half or more of the text is not needed, even more if you take in mind that there is a section where the creators explain their main motivations for the characters and the story.
Taking too long decreases the quality of the product. I know it is hard to cut off things instead of freely adding everything, but this could be MUCH MORE BETTER with less content. This is my issue with this game. It took me months to finish it and there were times where I felt like giving it up because it was a pain.
This reminds me much of Umineko, which is very long and bad paced in lots of parts, but with a complex and dream like story. I love the manga version of Umineko but I gave up the VN and finished it years later.

The base story is good. Some chapters were very good (even being a bit too much), for example chapters: 1, 4 and 5. The characters are well done in general, but also is a bit sad how utterly dumb they behave.

This is not a story for everyone. Some may enjoy it, but I am sure there is a fair amount of people who will not.

I played this offline with normal wine on Linux with the Windows' version of the game. For some reason Proton was not working as expected. This drags too much, which is a common problem in VNs. Half or more of the text is not needed, even more if you take in mind that there is a section where the creators explain their main motivations for the characters and the story. Taking too long decreases the quality of the product. I know it is hard to cut off things instead of freely adding everything, but this could be MUCH MORE BETTER with less content. This is my issue with this game. It took me months to finish it and there were times where I felt like giving it up because it was a pain. This reminds me much of Umineko, which is very long and bad paced in lots of parts, but with a complex and dream like story. I love the manga version of Umineko but I gave up the VN and finished it years later. The base story is good. Some chapters were very good (even being a bit too much), for example chapters: 1, 4 and 5. The characters are well done in general, but also is a bit sad how utterly dumb they behave. This is not a story for everyone. Some may enjoy it, but I am sure there is a fair amount of people who will not.