I just played your game and I'd like to say it was the most
annoying thing I ever played. It had it's cool moments but overall
the experience was only of annoyance. The problem is that it does
not touch the heart of people. It's a very emotionless game.

Did you ask any girls to try out your game? I ask because they
are blissfully less logical than us guys. I am very logical myself,
but also very emotional, so it was easy for me to find the game annoying.
What happened is that your game frustrated me. I felt like I was being
taken into someone else's hallways, doors and plans, to deliver me
and experience that didn't touch me.

AND WORST OF ALL

I had absolutely no free will in the game, no way to change anything,
no impact, no power, I accomplished nothing. People play games
because of what they can do inside them, and your game is very good
at letting them know

THEY CAN'T DO ANYTHING!

Other things I didn't like were the amount of narrator dialogue too much,
and that 'Stanley' is repeated all the time by the narrator.

Overall...

Your game is on a good path! I think. Good luck with it and best regards,

-Raphael