Difficulty is difficult isn't it, especially with the ability to hit and be hit by foes through solid objects? Indeed, I only managed to off the skeleton club elite by beating on him through the walls of the house, and don't even ask about the wraith master. Lords knows how I'll get on when they fix that!
May I suggest adding introductory dialogue from the benighted man by the spawn point? Why am I here, what's happening, what are all these bits of book about?
Regardless of that the scene was good and overall it wwould make a good scenario within a larger story.