Good lighting, but detailing could use a lot of work. Fairly good looking for your first map (except for the outdoors vista).
I'd definitely recommend implementing some sort of cleanup script (like the one provided in The Giant with the mod tools) and properly setting up spawners with your zones, to address pacing issues.
There isn't much to do other than survive, which is fine, but a simple side quest to turn on power and/or unlock PAP would be a welcome addition.

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Good lighting, but detailing could use a lot of work. Fairly good looking for your first map (except for the outdoors vista).
I'd definitely recommend implementing some sort of cleanup script (like the one provided in The Giant with the mod tools) and properly setting up spawners with your zones, to address pacing issues.
There isn't much to do other than survive, which is fine, but a simple side quest to turn on power and/or unlock PAP would be a welcome addition.

Thank you for your feedback on the map. I will be updating the map with a visual and gameplay overhaul to address these issues and adding more areas to explore instead of just a bunker

If you're still updating this map, in the pylon room, I'd add a very active spawner. Not sure if you can change how active they are, but just having them drop in the from the ceiling would make the room more difficult. Add more perk machines to the map, I'm sure you will later on but wonderfizz just isn't as fun. Maybe add a room above the pylon room, like an upstairs staircase between that and jug's room (more room for perk machines.) And a personal request of an RPG 7 wallbuy, it's just so fun to blow things up.

Sorry, forgot to say buyable endings are always fun objects and easy to add.