I felt like trying my hand at rephrasing card text again. The primary goal was to save space, so filler words were omitted on purpose. Hopefully I raised clarity as well as brevity.

I buffed a few cards too but it's minor stuff. If I ever feel motivated, I might post a table like this for buffs & nerfs. Hoshino does feel undertuned as a result of the fundamental Reload mechanic, but not by much.

Reminder:
These are just suggestions. You decide what to do with your mod.

@Zu

Thank you for the English text!

It is very helpful because I was having trouble with English translation.

Some text may be difficult to apply now (mainly for technical reasons, countdowns are used as one variable for each card), but I will consider it as positively as possible.

Interesting. At first I was just gonna write "Does a thing when drawn." or something, but I figured you could have fun with more countdown synergy. Oh well.

@LS_Naix

I checked and applied the Chinese translation.

Thank you for the translation!

Here's the Chinese translation update:
https://mega.nz/file/ddtSUZaL#IGSTwlQJlyek2Tn_N_2ZwHQo301F68PYi2qZe_VSU5w

@LS_Naix

Thanks for the quick translation!

Here's some suggestion on cards rebalancing:
Full Salvo: This card is apparently overpower as an initial card when get upgraded.Compare to such as Ricochet Shot the Rare card,and Double Shot the Common card,this initial cards is the best choice so even you can skip almost all other attack cards and survive from early floor.Suggestion:revert to 2 cost for 5 dmg.

Jackpot: Drawing 1 card makes this card takes no card slot to play..Compare to its origin card Grand Finale,Jackpot is much more easy to play and make effect,with initial reload card this can get two-card loop much more easily.Suggestion:Remove drawing,or at least remove drawing when countdown becomes 0.

@LS_Naix

(It might be weird because I'm using a translator.)

Thank you for your feedback.

Personally, I thought the deck of increasing ammo was weak, so I buffed full salvo, but I think it might have been a little too much.

also I buffed the jackpot because I didn't think it was such a strong card if it wasn't a loop, but if the loop seems to be too easy, I think I need to do a nerf.

Thank you for your advice. I'll consider it for the next patch.

星野（hoshino）整体上围绕运转做文章，计数机制让很多卡的成长与运转挂钩，运转得越快牌成长得就越快，就能越快超模。但比较矛盾的是开局有5张打击，弹药有限需要装弹，使得星野前期比较孱弱，又需要快速抓一些低质量过渡保证存活，导致卡组很难精简下来，提高了运转压力。
我希望作者可以考虑增强“全弹发射”这张初始卡，由于装弹机制的存在，导致在前期它的实际耗费接近3而不是2。最起码把它的伤害从4改成5，或者把费用减少1吧。

Finish Hoshino to beat a20 difficulty with 60% winning rate, great design.
I'm curious that if you have the move mechanism of the bosses which can share to the community?
Kaitenger is too difficult under most circumstances as chapter 2 boss.

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Finish Hoshino to beat a20 difficulty with 60% winning rate, great design.
I'm curious that if you have the move mechanism of the bosses which can share to the community?
Kaitenger is too difficult under most circumstances as chapter 2 boss.

Thank you for your feedback! I feel like the bosses in Act 2 have too much HP overall.
I'll refer to it later if I need to change the balance.
As you suggested, I posted the boss information from Hoshino Mod Github Wiki.
If you are interested, please visit it.
Thank you!

https://github.com/kimjoy2002/StSHoshino/wiki

Totem Pole relic feels extremely weak for a Boss relic. Unless you have a tiny deck and the fight lasts a while, you're unlikely to draw any curse/status card twice. Synergy with count-down decreasing cards can help a little, but even then it's very situational. I'd suggest to either turn it into a non-boss relic, or apply the following tweaks that should make it more versatile:

When a status or curse card is drawn, draw a card. All status and curse cards gain "Countdown (2): Exhaust".

Tactical Reload+ seems too strong. Especially in combination with Rush Standby. If you compare it to something like Ironclad's Juggernaut, Tactical Reload hits all enemy and costs 1, and the upgrade is too large.