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Total War: WARHAMMER III >  创意工坊 > Rhox 的创意工坊 > Dark Elf Rivalry feature for Tyrion (Discontinued for now) > 讨论
Dark Elf Rivalry feature for Tyrion (Discontinued for now)
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Kriega1 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 4:33
Typo's and stuff that could be potentially rewritten (grammar/spelling)
"Druchi" should be Druchii (Basically anywhere that "Druchi" is mentioned should be Druchii

E.g. "End of Druchi Threat" to End of Druchii threat"

"We have eclipsed the Druchi in every aspect and they're no threat to us any longer. Should we end this conflict and declare ourselves a supreme winner?" to We have eclipsed the Druchii in every aspect and they're no longer a threat to us. Should we end this conflict and declare our superiority?

"We're completely beaten by our enemies and our people have lost trust in us. There seems to be no chance of winning.\\n\\n But there is a slight chance that remains. That is to awaken the cursed blood running in your vein and awaken yourself as an avatar of a Khaine. You'll get immense power to overcome any enemy that comes forwards you. However, it's a forbidden path and there will be a great price to pay. " to We're completely beaten by our enemies and our people have lost trust in us. There seems to be no chance of victory. \\n\\n But there is a slight chance that remains. Take the Widowmaker from it's shrine, awaken the cursed blood running in your veins and proclaim yourself as an avatar of a Khaine. You'll receive immense power to overcome any enemy that challenges you. However, it is a forbidden path amongst the Asur and there will be a great price to pay.


"Druchis are no match for us." to The Druchii are no match for us.


"The scales have turned towards our side, but it's only a minor." to The scales have turned towards our side, but it's only minor.

"The scales have turned towards the enemy side, but it's only a minor." to The scales have turned towards the enemy side, but it's only minor.

"Our enemies gained an upper hand." to Our enemies have gained the upper hand.

"We are completely lost and there seems to be no way to turn the tides back." to We are on the brink of defeat. (Could keep this one the same)

For the all the Rivalry sections, could maybe put "to" in between the values? E.g. "Rivalry (+17 to +20)
最后由 Kriega1 编辑于; 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 4:41
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Rhox  [开发者] 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 4:40 
It was a double I? Dang, I need to change the whole text from everywhere. Thanks for making the correction
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Kriega1 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 4:42 
Also in the UI i've seen "Rivarly" mispelled, it should be Rivalry
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Rhox  [开发者] 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 4:46 
引用自 Kriega1：
Also in the UI i've seen "Rivarly" mispelled, it should be Rivalry
Yeah, all effect bundle is misspelled. Will change that. Thank you.
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Kriega1 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 5:36 
Also in faction select, under faction effects, "settlement" should be settlements
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Rhox  [开发者] 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 5:38 
引用自 Kriega1：
Also in faction select, under faction effects, "settlement" should be settlements
Wow, you really do have an eye for catching these matters. Have changed it and will update it in the next batch of updates. Thank you.
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Kriega1 2023 年 1 月 13 日 上午 6:00 
Also a very small thing (if you want to change it):

"Rivalry (-8 to -5)" would make more sense as Rivalry (-5 to -8)

Same for:

"Rivalry (-12 to -9)" to Rivalry (-9 to -12)

"Rivalry (-16 to -13)" to Rivalry (-13 to -16)

"Rivalry (-20 to -17)" to Rivalry (-17 to -20)

Up to you of course
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