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Wisp Bautta
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Ko 2019 年 11 月 10 日 下午 8:36
Design & LVL of Player Mentality
1St Overall great design

Now onto the critic (I have the 3D model open while criticing )

*The helmet seems to be way to big in height and length, its design seem to look like (in my eyes at least ) a combination of Ash's carabid helmet (extended though) and banshee's normal helmet(hallowed and carved out)

*Not saying it's not bad design but for wisp personally it makes her lose her subtle elegance, grandeur doesn't always mean you should go big to be impressive.

* The chest region needs the most work. Now notice the title included "Player Mentality " In all honest there are a lot of immature players ,SO i'd rather not let your work be tarnished by them. This design makes wisp have glowing nips... though i see the fairy from zelda
I would work on changing this to avoid immature memes on the warframe fourm...or anywhere else.

*Maybe a little bit more design on botton or even the entire tail flaps on her coat

Final words, Still Love your work keep designing.
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swankypoo  [开发者] 2019 年 11 月 11 日 上午 1:51 
thankz for the input :D will keep these in mind
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Cano_Lathra 2019 年 11 月 12 日 上午 6:31 
Not to be crude, but what females have 'nips' in that location? If anything, the Metallic part that is 'covering' the glowing part is where they would be. Though, to be perfectly honest, the shape of her entire chest falls into "Uncanny Valley" territory for me, which is a problem with the base model and not this skin.

Moving on, I agree that the helmet is a bit large, but there are other helmets available, and I would personally buy this skin and use a different helmet.
The coatflaps seem fine to me, if a bit long. I assume that they are the exact same length as base model, though, given the Tennogen rules, so I'm not sure how they appear long in this and normal with base. Maybe it's because of the stiff positions they are in for the 3D display, as opposed to draping gracefully as they normally do in-game.

Overall, really good skin. I will drop $$ on this if it ever releases.
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おちゃま 2019 年 12 月 20 日 上午 4:37 
have you ever even seen a nipple
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your fate is sealed 2020 年 5 月 22 日 上午 11:55 
I do not want to insult you, but you see things in places that look normal to everyone else. And why do you think the author should implement your sense of political correctness? Furthermore, why should an artist stick to wisps "subtle elegance"? Aren't skins supposed to redefine a character? Other than that, your critic was very informative! :hrx_support:
最后由 your fate is sealed 编辑于; 2020 年 5 月 22 日 上午 11:59
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