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I'm a Designer and I wanna help !
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Zerahl 2013 年 11 月 4 日 下午 3:36
Issues and corrections
Hey CutThroat,

Below are some things that I noticed in your project.

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Design
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- Unfocusing and refocusing the game can cause vertical mouse controls to become unresponsive (this can be corrected by unfocusing, adjusting the camera then refocusing again)

- Minor clipping issues in rock canyon


Linguistics
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- a walk in a professionnal route -
- a walk on a professional route -

Several game concepts document writing
Several game concepts' document writing

Resume in 3D - The game in wich you are reading this
Resume in 3D - The game in which you are reading this

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I hope this proves useful and that this project leads you to many future endeavours. :)

- Zerahl
最后由 Zerahl 编辑于; 2013 年 11 月 6 日 下午 6:52
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CutThroat Neko  [开发者] 2013 年 11 月 5 日 上午 1:22 
Thank you very much !!
I'll correct that soon !
#1
.Drak! 2013 年 11 月 5 日 上午 9:32 
not trying to be a smartass here but:

Languistic
Linguistics

endevours
endeavours

typo on "uselful" but i'm not going to make a fuss about that one

Also " I hope this proves useful and I hope this...."

Saying " I hope this "something" and i hope this " something " is a bit redundant

You can just say " I hope this proves useful and that this project leads you to... "
最后由 .Drak! 编辑于; 2013 年 11 月 5 日 上午 9:36
#2
Zerahl 2013 年 11 月 6 日 下午 6:50 
Dat irony. XD
Cheers, Drak.
Corrections made.
#3
2C 2013 年 11 月 20 日 下午 5:49 
please
tell me
if there are any
screamers
in the woods
#4
e.dafydd 2013 年 12 月 11 日 下午 12:13 
引用自 Kenny Mcormick：
please
tell me
if there are any
screamers
in the woods
Totally agree with you.
最后由 e.dafydd 编辑于; 2015 年 2 月 22 日 上午 1:02
#5
Zerahl 2013 年 12 月 14 日 上午 3:54 
引用自 Kenny Mcormick：
please
tell me
if there are any
screamers
in the woods

I would; however, telling would be... well... telling. ;D
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