Warframe 星际战甲

Warframe 星际战甲

Octavia Diva
FatWolfBooty 2017 年 10 月 28 日 上午 2:04
Unbiased critique
(Because there's a lot of biased, angery, 'weeb' haters it seems)

Obviously inspired by anime, but designed in a way that very truly sticks to the warframe aesthetic. Despite being one of the more austentatious and 'out there' items in the steam workshop, I believe both octavia skin and polearm skin look like they would belong in the universe, however I do have a couple of gripes.

The first would be the texture of the tails. The tails look a little unfinished (though not all that bad) and could use a redesign of texture, or perhaps even a full redesign to resemble the same materials Nezha's tails are made from.

The second being how the tail bases just float there so far away. I get theres plenty of high tech in the Warframe universe, it could easily be possible, but it looks/feels unfinished. Moving the bases a bit closer to her actual head would make a big difference in my opinion, or even moving up right against her helmet. They're just to far out there.

Despite all that, you've done fantastic work here, it really deserves a place in the game, and I hope it gets it.
最后由 FatWolfBooty 编辑于; 2017 年 10 月 28 日 上午 2:08
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VioletChainsaw 2017 年 11 月 3 日 下午 6:19 
I like this critique, it makes sense. Yea the tails are starting to look like a solid shape to me rather than something like energy. It might need something like prisma effect or another energy type in the game, would make it really stand out. Oh, and it could probably be transperant as well.
最后由 VioletChainsaw 编辑于; 2017 年 11 月 3 日 下午 6:19
DBlueDog 2017 年 11 月 4 日 下午 2:58 
I personally think that if it becomes transparent on a gradiant towards the end that'll look nice, not too sure on changing much else to be honest. I really think the *vocaloid* look fits Octavia well.
CrusaderF8 2017 年 11 月 5 日 上午 1:03 
Probably the best feedback I've seen so far. Personally, I think the "hair" has to retain the energy glow, whatever other changes are made. Maybe make said "hair" use a gradius ripple laser-esque effect? I dunno.

https://opengameart.org/sites/default/files/styles/medium/public/M484BulletCollection2PRE3.png

(Top left/center)

Probably too much, honestly.
最后由 CrusaderF8 编辑于; 2017 年 11 月 5 日 上午 1:04
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