I've always loved the "Toy Soldier" aesthetic for maps, but there's a few issues with this map that I need to critique.


The AI frequently shoots at you through walls. While attempting to make a push into the Living Room from Bedroom Halllway, I noticed that bullets were literally flying through the sofa and damaging me. The bullets were coming from the back corner of Entrance Hallway on the opposite end of Main Hallway. This "wallhacking" issue got me killed numerous times while trying to push.
Also, while trying to capture the living room flag, there is a spawn point on the opposite side of the cardboard box with ramps leaned up against it. This spawn point kept spawning ~5 enemies at a time, and immediately upon spawning, I would see a metric f*ck ton of bullets and shotgun pellets flying through the cardboard box right towards me (before promptly dying).


The map is also surprisingly linear, and a rather typical (or "traditional", if you will) frontline situation develops, where both Eagle and Raven are battling over the Living Room which is at the center of the map, and neither team can make an effective push on the opposition.

I suggest adding another entrance to the outside area in Second Bedroom, such as a window. This would give Second Bedroom an actual reason to exist on the map (it's currently tucked out of the way and barely sees any playtime) and allow Eagle to flank outside and keep gameplay shifting, rather than just keeping a constant stalemate over the Living Room.

I also suggest ventillation shafts and / or mouse holes be added to enter and serve as flanking routes.

I'd also LOVE to see the addition of shelving units up high on the walls which are covered in books, picture frames, trophies etc. If you could get up onto a shelf with a sniper rifle and use a book as cover, it could offer an insanely fun sniping experience.

-These opinions are spawned from a match where the balance was shifted slightly into the enemy team's favor to make up for the fact that a human being is on one of the teams
-My suggestions are just that: Suggestions. You can listen to them and choose to implement them into your map if you wish, or even use them as inspiration, or choose to do nothing at all.
-My intention here is NOT to "hate on" your creation, my intention here is to hopefully help it see its true potential.