I liked every part except the first jump with the turrets. Also, it was hard to tell that there was conversion gel; it looked too much like cleansing gel. I would start it against a dark backdrop to make it more obvious.
Care to try my tests?
http://psteamcommunity.yuanyoumao.com/id/elmahnken/myworkshopfiles/

if you jump close to the wall you won't have any trouble to avoid them

Cheap turret kills are a bad thing.