I think this build would be amazing if it had an outer shooting floor,and peeks from a second floor down to the main hallway(shooting floor and inner peeks on second or third floor)

This base offers a tiny amount of boxes, no roof, relies on auto turrets and ontop of all is compact.
Lootrooms are made in such a way that if you are getting online raided you will bunker yourself in and not fight back. Considering the price of the base you should have a better way to defend your base because the 17 rockets to the tc is a won raid.

Awesome build, finding it pretty hard to actually build from the FORTIFY plan though.