Animation needs polishing but the dialogue's hilarious.
Maybe try giving it more camera angles to give the illusion of movement and a larger surprise (make the car abduction an easter egg for the first couple seconds)

They abducted your car!

great work, but mind-numbingly dull to me.

Great voice acting. Also, there's nothing wrong with the pen... lol

@number one - I couldn't find a good pen model so I just used the bullet. I mean there are bullet shaped novelty pens though but that's just picking at straws.

Is good but a little more of polishing, and better sound efect and bullet cannot be pens.