I would like to know how, so I can make better in future.

Love the shading in this one on the side but I can def help you make it look good if you would like respectfully if you have no clue on lines and shading

I'm sorry..
I hope you still have contact with them or visit them, right..?

I miss my family

This sh belongs in a museum ngl, like genuinely.
I really hope your parents are aware of this