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Elite Moogle Marine Force EMMF
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Davoin Shower-Handel 2012 年 12 月 4 日 上午 9:11 
Oh hey remember this old thing
Auatarch 2012 年 10 月 14 日 下午 1:55 
Son, nothing good was ever posted here.
TK 2012 年 10 月 13 日 上午 10:56 
it's been over a year since anything was posted here
TK 2011 年 8 月 1 日 下午 10:48 
those chat quotes are gay
Auatarch 2011 年 3 月 16 日 下午 6:00 
ACTIVITY HO!
Terhm 2011 年 3 月 6 日 下午 10:01 
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Terhm 2011 年 3 月 6 日 下午 10:01 
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Terhm 2011 年 3 月 6 日 下午 10:01 
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Auatarch 2011 年 1 月 20 日 下午 1:05 
IMA COMMENTING FROM SCHOOL! I'm such a rebel...
TK 2010 年 12 月 18 日 下午 5:01 
this group will never see the light of activity
Terhm 2010 年 12 月 16 日 下午 3:23 
we need to do ♥♥♥♥ on here again.
TK 2010 年 12 月 10 日 下午 3:14 
wow these are old
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 29 日 下午 6:26 
Bump.
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 21 日 下午 4:03 
I don't think I was joking. I think I was advocating their cause, if anything. Harold learns to believe in his tradition beliefs in the end.
Auatarch 2010 年 9 月 21 日 下午 3:19 
Thomas, Thomas, Judaism is no laughing matter, very serious buisness it is, very very serious and not to be trifled with. I knew a guy who knew a guy whos sister trifled with Judaism, and they killed her, and the guy that the guy I knew knew, then the guy i knew was strangled in his sleep, and I think there coming for me next. So lay of the Jew jokes, their God doesnt take ♥♥♥♥ from anyone, and he has a pretty high kdr, if you know what I mean
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 16 日 下午 6:23 
Hey guys...
Han Shot First
Tom Got First
They almost rhyme.
Dushana 2010 年 9 月 14 日 下午 4:04 
HATRED! REACHING! MAXIMUM!
Terhm 2010 年 9 月 14 日 下午 2:19 
Just now read thomas's comment about 9/11. we need to stop RPing stat.
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 11 日 下午 9:44 
Dear Moogles,

It has come to my attention that there exists a certain corruption among our ranks. Perhaps you have not noticed it, or perhaps you have, but I am here to tell you that it is all too real.

It all started a month ago. I was walking down the street when out of the corner of my eye I spotted something. It was lustrious, and I approached it cautiously. As I got closer, I realized it was some sort of octagonal object, no bigger than a quarter. I stooped down and picked it up, but it was very hot, and I dropped it. It shattered as it hit the ground. I was dismayed, but I noticed that something was inside of it that had fallen out now that it was in pieces, in a matter similar to that of a piggy bank. This I touched (making sure it was not hot as well) and upon discovering its mild coolness, I picked it up. It was a small piece of paper, with seven words scrawled onto it in hastily written handwriting. The message is as follows:

"The Moogles trust me, I will help you."
Dushana 2010 年 9 月 10 日 下午 6:19 
hatred manifesting!
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 10 日 下午 6:11 
Rick, I'm sorry, but I don't like your story. In the beginning, we have an ordianry Jewish teenager, who's Judaism was supposed to manifest itself more fully throughtout the story. His experiences should have made him realize that his religion is a part of who he is. Most importantly, though, he should have become an upstanding member of his community.

I had many plot twists in mind. For example, his younger brother, Raymond, should have been diagnosed with cancer on the night before his barmitzvah. This would have been one of the many challenges that Harold would face throughout the story.

Also, I was playing around with the idea of his rabbai being a sort of a mentor to him throughout the course of the tale. Harold, although not mentioned in the first sentence below, does not have a father, because his father died in a tragic accident during an extremist Jewish rally. This would have set the stage for Harold's uncertainty in himself and what he believes.
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 10 日 下午 6:11 
Furthermore, this last idea would have had parallels with today's issue in the Middle East, making the story more relatable.

It also must be noted that Harold is a teenager, so he should be exposed to real life problems. Remember, in his community, his faith is put to the test every day by peer pressure from his classmates, his teachers and his enemy, who has constantly bullied him in school, Kevin.

About Kevin. Kevin went to school with Harold all through gradeschool, and always made fun of Harold for his faith. After the extremist rally, Harold's classmates isolated him more because they were scared of him, even though Harold explained to them that they had different beliefs than him.

With all this negativity, it is fitting that Harold should have a friend. I imagined a childhood friend (probably named Melissa) who would accompany him through the tough times. Throughout the novel, their relationship would grow stronger.

As you can see..
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 10 日 下午 6:10 
Rick wrote garbage.
Terhm 2010 年 9 月 9 日 下午 5:02 
♥♥♥♥ Rick that's dark.
Auatarch 2010 年 9 月 9 日 下午 1:45 
Suddenly, Davey was shot in the head by a sniper and Harold was sucked through a magical time vortex and landed in another world. THere he met many beautiful ladies and like a real man had sex with all of them and SAVED THE WORLD, he was made king and ruled for 50 YEARS. One day while he was doing kingly things, he fell through another vortex, this one returning him to his real world in a room empty except for a sniper rifle. He was 16 again and framed for the murder of his best friend, no one would believe the story of his other life, he was deemed insane and then given the death penalty, the end
Auatarch 2010 年 9 月 9 日 下午 1:43 
inb4 probably will be for life
Dushana 2010 年 9 月 4 日 上午 9:05 
Whilest chatting with Davy, who's still in the Navy
Thesolis 2010 年 9 月 2 日 下午 7:42 
Let's start a story: Harold, a young lad of 16, found himself walking towards the synagogue on a dreary Sunday morning.
Dushana 2010 年 8 月 29 日 下午 3:20 
JEALOUSY I FEED OFF OF IT!
Dushana 2010 年 8 月 24 日 下午 8:14 
I DISAGREE
Auatarch 2010 年 8 月 23 日 下午 4:50 
Remember when there were comments here, yea me too...
Auatarch 2010 年 8 月 21 日 下午 5:59 
WHERE DID THE COMMENTS GO, COMON PEOPLE< DADDY NEEDS SOME SAUCE