Hello
I'm glad to hear your thoughts about the group. I really appreciate it.
I've sent a pm to see what I could help with. I checked the game out and would give it a go for sure.

Sent an invite so we could talk more. For myself and my small group of reviewers. I could post your discussion into that group also if you'd like.

Your welcome and thank you for accepting it.

Invite sent.

Thank you for that. I'd appreciate it.

Hello

"- life are" I think you mean "- lives are"
"- Rooms full of eggs and boxes" not sure eggs is the right word. I watched the video you posted here and didn't see any eggs.
"Simply I making" to "I'm simply making"
"So what this" to "So what's this"
"2/3 much bigger" to "2/3 bigger"
"much more polish" to "a much more polished"

Those were a quick few I would suggest. Hope it helps with what Valve asked you to do.

Hello. Thank you for posting this. I have sent you an invite to my Greenlight group. You can also post a thread in there for this.
Good luck with your Greenlight.

引用自 Brainbox Software：

Hi guys. My game is currently in Beta, but will be releasing on 11th of Dec. Anyone who wants to help test the game or just play and review it would be appreciated.

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http://psteamproxy.yuanyoumao.com/app/399070/

"Q9NXD-BKPXK-HBFE3" thank you for posting these for the group. Grabbed my key for testing.

Thank you for posting and congrats on 50% that quick.
I've sent you an invite to my Greenlight group. Feel free to repost this thread in there too.

Your original post is reposted as an announcement in my reviewers group. I know mathyno should be sending you a friend request because he said he was interested. I sent you an invite to get started on my review/recommendation/gameplay parts.
Thanks again.